When
I remember the first day in class when Prof. Pittmann told us that we needed to
do a blog for the class I thought that it would be an easy job for me to do,
since I love anything computer related. This reaction lasted till the moment
that I began writing my first post. I think that it took me several hours for
me to think what I would write for everyone to read. The only thing that calms
me a little was that everybody else was put to do the same thing, so that
helped me not to feel lonely. I remember
that when I finished that first post, I rested like a baby. That same night
when I reflected on everything I did that day, and I notice that I could cross
out “Do the first post” I was extremely happy. Then as the next posts were
assigned, I dominated it with less difficulty. Today, I made my last changes to
this blog and this will be my last post on it, but I would let know everybody
reading this if in the future I decide to make a new blog for you to follow me.
Writing on this blog I believe that made me a better person because for example
it made me feel less shy and be a simpler person. This was a very productive assignment
for me. On this last post, I want to give special thanks to the professor but
also to every person on my group, which commented on every single post I made.
I know that you guys did it because you wanted to and not because you were
assigned to do it. Hahaha
Monday, December 2, 2013
Competition and Cooperation in Puerto Rico
I
am very amazed that an American came to Puerto Rico and choose to write about
the cheating problem happening at Puerto Rico. I know that for a professor
(specially Jim Cooper who is a “continental” one) that may be something
shocking but for me this is not significant. Maybe it is because I am a student
and I see this environment from another point of view from Jim Cooper. I have
plenty of personal experiences on this topic but I promise that I am not the
one cheating in all of them. The way in which Cooper introduces the problem
sounds awful, if people who have never been here at Puerto Rico read this, they
may think that we are opportunist and that everyone reaches their goal
cheating. But it is not like that, for example, I have two friends that could be
taking the Medical College Admission Test, and I know that if they have the key
to it, they would not used it because of not trusting someone.
Competition and cooperation are two ways different approaching to life, but in this aspect
both of them have their place and moment. I am the type of person who thinks
that helping each other is not a bad thing, but the other person must be
learning or at least interested on what he or she is cheating. In high school on
a test about a Spanish novel which name I do not remember, I got the test of my
friend, did it for her and handed it back to her. When I did that I didn’t
think about all the things that could have gone wrong but some days later, when
I was calm I realized that there are certain topics that do not help you for
anything in life. For example, she read the novel a lot, and it did not help
her at all. I know that she could learn more reading any other book, other than
that because she reads a lot but mainly in English. So I knew that I wasn’t
affecting her knowledge because she already has that custom of always been
reading and she learned that she has to learn to dominate more Spanish books.
Another
example was on a chemistry test, someone was cheating for almost three (3)
entire pages. I just could not believe it, I kept staring at the person
cheating for a long time. Maybe I could have used that time to think more about
my test, but it was difficult because I had never seen something like that
before. What is more unbelievable is that the person supervising the test, was a
friend of the cheater and the supervisor was the one giving the answers. When I
saw that, I was enraged, I almost ran through the hallway looking for the
professor. Chemistry was not easy for me, and when I saw that it hurt me. The next
day, when I saw the professor I told her everything, but I never knew what
happened later. I only knew that I felt better.
Wednesday, November 27, 2013
My internal journey during the making of the blog and the journal
At
first I thought that doing all of these assignments were going to be an easy
task but when I started doing them I notice that it would be a challenge for
me. During the making of the journal, I experience many journeys. At the
beginning I was a little bit stressful and conscious when writing but later on,
I just let it go. If I read my journal now, it is easy to notice the flow with
which I wrote. I just kept writing till the alarm for the 10 minutes rang. Many
times I was amazed at how fast the time went. I really appreciate this
experience because along these journeys, I learned many things about me such as
some of my passions, which are my beautiful girlfriend, sports and my future
career. I realize that I love all these things I mentioned because most of the
time when I was writing, I couldn’t get them out of my head. During the making
of the blog, I got stressed a lot, but now I feel very proud of all the work I
did. I like a lot how colorful this blog ended. For me writing it’s almost my
passion but what makes it not be it yet is that it is very difficult for me to
know what I am going to write about. For example on these posts, which my topic
is imposed, I believe that it is easier for me to do the writing. Now, having
almost ended up with this blog, I can reflect on this entire journey I experience
and see how great it feels having a little public space on the Internet.
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Many times when writing, I first navigate the internet to get inspire. For good quotes visit here and for great inspirational music please visit here.
A Letter to Cynthia
Hi
Cynthia Pittmann, I want to thank you for all the changes that this class have
done with me. This semester for me would be unforgettable because of all the
classes I manage at the same time but specially because on this class I made my
first blog and I wrote a journal. I will think seriously about making another
blog for all the things that I want to share with my friend in the future. What
I love the most of this class was everything that I discovered by doing the
journey journal and some of the activities such as a day as a tourist. On my
journal, I love everything I wrote since the beginning. At first I did many
entries talking about the stuff I like to do but later on I learn to let my
mind fly free and try to catch up my thoughts while writing. This technique
helped me know more about myself. I also notice about many things that I like
to do that before I didn’t knew such as watching some series that I mention
such as Pawn Stars from History Channel. This journal also helped me express my
anger when I was feeling sad and just by writing whatever I felt writing, at
the end I always felt better or while writing I found a solution to whatever
problem I was going through. A dynamic that we made a lot in class that I like
was decorating our journey journals with pictures, because this help other
people know you better and even help you describe the type of person that one
is. I like the way that you used refer to us, always with respect and you were
always there for us for any questions that we may have. I say this since I send
to you approximately 7 or 8 emails that maybe made you feel tired from me but
you never said anything to me. ha ha ha.
Once again thank you for everything, and I know that this class will
help a lot in the future because of all the writing we did.
Daisy Miller's Discussion
When we read Daisy Miller at class, we were ask to answer some questions to analyze and get a better idea from this novella. First we need to know how to differentiate a tourist from a traveler. Later on, I will give my opinion about what is what and if Daisy Miller is a tourist or if she is a traveler. I will support my opinion with some quotes that I found interesting.
For me Daisy Miller is a tourist
because a tourist visits a place and mainly visits the tourist attractions,
therefore doesn’t get involve with the society. They see other places as an
opportunity to be relaxed. We can also say that she is a little selfish because
she does not care for example about Italy’s current problems. In contrast
travelers are the opposite because they go to a new place and get informed of
almost everything. They also try to experience everything by themselves.
Therefore I believe that Daisy is a tourist because she doesn’t try to get
along or get involved with European’s culture. Another detail about travelers
is that they visit a place not because of any promotion or propaganda, but
instead because they are willing to go.
A good quote for demonstrating this
is when Winterbourne remembers, “I’ve heard that my pretty cousins in NY were
tremendous flirts.” By this quote the author expresses that Winterbourne is
seeing Daisy as a flirty young lady while she was only leaving the reality in
one side and enjoying the trip as tourists do. Another quote that helps me
explain the differences is when Winterbourne states “I had never, as yet had
any relations with young ladies this category”. This other quote also helps us
see the flirty side that Winterbourne is seeing from Daisy while she is just
been a tourist. But also it let’s us know how amazed is Winterbourne at Daisy
because of her being so different from other women that he have known before.
The difference for me is that a
tourist, when they are visiting other places, they are escaping their real
problems and world. Tourists basically visit some new places because of
advertisements and/or references from other people. Most tourists just think
about them and do not take in what the other community or society are based on
while a traveler tries to integrate and experience the new community that they
are visiting. A good example for both is the difference between the places that
they both visit. While a tourist visit mostly tourist places which we could
define as fake or prepared to create a relaxing environment, a traveler for example
visit places such as urban places, and places visited by natives.
I also found some incidences about othering in this novella. We could see some othering
in this novel such as the following. When Winterbourne talks to his aunt Mrs.
Costello about Daisy and she says “they are very common, they are the sort of
Americans that one does owns duty by not-accepting”. This shows how Mrs.
Costello basically feels and shows herself as in a higher class than Daisy, and
even a better person by just seen them once in the lobby. Mrs. Costello just
stereotyped Daisy like if she were a common young flirty lady coming from New
York, which Mrs. Costello has a very bad concept about them. Other othering
moment in this novella is when Daisy describes Mr. Geovanelli as the best type
of men because he is an Italian. She says, “He is an Italian… he is the handsomenest
man in the world”. This makes remarkable how women see Italians because of all
the movies that are made in which Europe or for example Italy is represented as
a perfect place for living. This novella may be fictional but this happens a
lot in our life. She obviously talks good about him because she wants to be
with him. Another quote could be when Mrs. Costello describes Daisy, as “She is
the sort of young lady who expects a man, sooner or later, to carry her off?”
She here mentions and makes us see Americans as some people that depend on
others and that try living off from other’s work. She criticizes very hard
Americans but maybe it is because of the way in which she sees herself as a
superior being. Possibly she wants Winterbourne to have a date with a European
girl instead of an American one.
In this novella, the characters
perception to the different situations that are encountered can be explained
based on the characters nationality or the society to which they have been
related. For example, during the whole novella Daisy is othered and misunderstood
by the Europeans for her way of being because she has the habits and the
culture of an American young girl. Daisy doesn’t bother to adapt her lifestyle
to that of the Europeans and it is not important to her what the people around
her thinks about that. For Daisy, going out in the night with men or to go
somewhere during the day with a man alone is fine. In contrast, Mrs, Costello
an European and “well cultivated” women, sees Daisy’s customs as audacious or
improper for a young lady and she rejects her and describes her as a common and
vulgar lady. This can be seen very clearly in the novella when Winterbourne is sustaining
a conversation with Mrs. Costello and she says, "They are very common… They are
the sort of Americans that one does one's duty by not—not accepting". This
quote declares by itself that Mrs. Costello’s thoughts toward Daisy are
moderated by the cultural values she has from the European culture, which is a
strict one especially towards women. On the other hand, by Winterbourne's
reaction in that same conversation when he says, "Ah, you are cruel!...
She's a very nice young girl", it can be interpreted that he understands
the difference in the cultural values even that he sees Daisy as a “very
uncultivated” young lady. This attitude can be attributed to the social
environment that Winterbourne had in his life since he was born in the United
States and then went to live in Europe. Finally, it can be seen in the novella
that the culture and society influences directly in the way of thinking and
perspective of things by the contrast that exist between Daisy’s, Winterbourne
and Mrs. Costello’s characters and their social environment.
Monday, November 4, 2013
Reflection on my Journey Journal
On this post I will reflect on the
journey journal I’ve been doing for the last 8 weeks. In this journal I have
been imposed some rules to follow such as write your first thoughts, always
keep your hand moving, don’t cross out, forget about grammar and punctuation,
etc. Some of these rules have been a challenge to me but gracefully I’ve done
it.
On my journey journal I notice about
many changes I did since the beginning. The first main change was when I
decided to write slanted or diagonally, I thought that it would be very
difficult for me, since I’ve always tried to write on the lines. At the
beginning I wrote curvy, like an arc, when you first see it, it would seem that
the words are falling from the notebook, but if you compare that to how I ended
it, you can see all the entire changes I did. I ended writing very precisely
and diagonally as I tried to do in the first place. Another thing I notice was
that I started crossing out every misspelled word and on the first ones I
crossed out, I also put on my initials, as if it was my organic chemistry’s lab
notebook. Since that moment I remember how seriously I took my lab. But them I
learned to ignore all the misspelling and focus on the continuous writing.
At the beginning I first stop many
times when writing because I have been always been the type of person that needs
to think about the topic that I will write, so for me the stream of
consciousness technique was very difficult. When writing, I always got
distracted with all the things I got to do or the things that I wished to do,
but I know that all of these distractions helped me out specially on my
organization. I believe that it easily cost me my first 20 entries to get used
to write my first thoughts. For me this activity was very difficult and at the
beginning I wrote about the TV shows I see and the journeys that I went
thinking about them and stuff like that, but later I got better. After all
these first entries, my journal got a look like a little bit messy but it was
when I fully reach the ability of writing every single thought that came to my
mind. It really looks like I mess but maybe it is because my mind sometimes
goes crazy thinking on many things at the same time. That’s why I found this
very useful. This journal helped me understand the mess of thoughts I am
usually dealing with.
The life compass activity was very
innovative for me. I’ve never heard of something like this. I did 5 compasses
in total since I focus mainly on the writing but I could say that I range all
the possible number in almost all the regions. The region in which I was most
stable was the spiritual. I consider myself with a good spiritual base because
since very little I was raised in the church and I feel very connected to God
and blessed by him in many aspects. Also, I feel very connected with nature,
which is the main reason that today I used my bicycle as my method of
transportation, because it does well to the environment plus I work out. Thanks
to the life compass activity I realize that I may change a lot from day to day
and that my main flaw is that I am resting very little. I know that it is
because of all the stress I’ve been through but I am handling it well, or at
least I am trying to.
Music I used to inspire.
Front Page - Journey Journal
Back Page - Journey Journal
Wednesday, October 30, 2013
My Reaction to: A Day as a Tourist
IHOP Barceloneta
Today was a day that I was very happy to be Puerto Rican for several reasons. To get started, today I passed by many beaches, which I had never been. We took a family trip along the northwest coast to near Mayagüez stopping at various tourist destinations such as the Arecibo’s Lighthouse, the face of Indian, etc. I have been amazed with how precious our island of Puerto Rico is. Today I tried to act like a tourist and always look everywhere watching everything. Since the morning I imagine that my bedroom was a room in a hotel. I loved that I did nothing more than leave my room, that I listened to music that my mom had put on, so that made it quite easy for me to imagine that I was entering a lobby from a hotel. In all the trips I have done I'm always checking on the food, because I love to eat, and on this trip I did the same. I was observing the dishes of all the restaurants we went to and tasted many of them. When we returned from the trip through the island, I loved being able to have stopped at IHOP because it is a restaurant I always look for when we travel to Florida long before it was brought here to PR. I made this trip with my family to do this journey as a tourist because I thought that as a tourist, the sense that one more uses is the visual because you feel like an explorer in a new world. Something that I observed about tourists was that before they do something, they first let someone else do it so that when they do it, they don’t look so awkward, such as when they were going to order something in a restaurant that they are always watching other tables first. I found this journey very curious and loved how we spent the whole day. I think I learned a lot from it.
Cara del Indio
Isabela's Coast
Music that I always imagine me listening to when being a tourist.
Wednesday, October 16, 2013
A Room with a View's Reaction
Lucy Honeychurch is the principal character on
this movie, she traveled to Italy with her cousin Charlotte which both of them
belong to the rich upper class. Lucy through the entire movie battles her
old-fashion Victorian values versus her more liberal ones. This movie starts at
Florence, Italy and it is based on a novel first publish in 1908. A reason of
why the movie may have began at Florence, could be that this place is very rich
and famous in art and culture. A mere observation of what principally made Lucy
change her mind about her values was that she expected Italy to be like
England, since in Italy you can see that social classes seem to mix. This could
be the best example of the advantages from being a tourist. For Lucy, this
whole trip help her open her eyes and see new things, as for example her
experience with the Emersons, which help her notice that she can find beauty in
the things that she found inappropriate. We can see that Lucy is a traveler
person, and we can see this when for example she realized that she fell in love
for George but at the same time she wants to stay single to travel to Greece
with Miss Alans, an aged woman she met in Florence. All these tourist examples
can’t be compared with the examples that Jamaica Kincaid mention at A Small Place, mainly because Kincaid
describe tourist as ugly and here on the movie are describe as being amazed at
things but in a real way and not for example wishing to live their rest of the
life on that “paradise”.
Tuesday, October 15, 2013
Lalo's Recognition Activity
I received a message
from the professor suggesting us to go to an activity in AJBR building on
Wednesday. It was something about a celebration of a tremendous work made by a
professor from the general studies department. I gave myself the homework to assist
and to see by myself who was this Eduardo Lalo.
I was late to the
activity because I was in class at the time that the activity started but still,
I went to AJBR to find out what was happening around there. As I started to
hear everyone else, I realized that Eduardo Lalo is a great writer who
considers himself puertorrican even that he was born in Cuba because he had
spent most of his life here in Puerto Rico. I also recognized that the award
that he received is called the “RomuloGallegos award” and that is an amazing
award for novels. It must have been an unforgettable experience when he received
that award because he was competing with his novel “Simone” with 200 other novels from people of 17 different countries.
The activity was
performed in the first floor of the AJBR building and organized by some
professors from the general studies department. In the time that I stayed, one of
his work mates of the humanities department discussed in an amusing one of his
novels that is named “Los pies de San Juan”. While he was talking I couldn’t
keep serious and laughed a little bit. I also noticed that Eduardo Lalo is a
person that sounds judicious but that keeps sounding young at the same time and
I admire that a lot from him.
Tuesday, October 1, 2013
The Rum Diaries
My reaction to this movie may be a
little different form everyone else because I didn’t like too much the movie,
only a few scenes. I didn’t like the way that Puerto Rico is portrayed,
specially on the scenes when Paul Kempt goes to a very “poor” part of Puerto
Rico where you can see burning tires, little kids playing on the mud and
another kid alone in an old abandoned car. I didn’t like this scene at all
because there is a very big difference between been poor and been reckless.
That “town” shown was a mess. I know that back then roofs where made out of
zinc, and that very little buildings were made on cement but this place shown
appears what it could have been a dumpster.
Another thing that I didn’t like was
when Sanderson was talking to Paul about putting a tax in Puerto Rico. He was
explaining that if you wanted to put a 5% tax, you just have to tell the people
that you will need to put a 10% for some reason, then the people will start
shouting and fighting but then you could say that because you want to treat
them well and be a good person you could put a 5% and everybody will be happy.
I hate how he says it as if we were just irrational humans, as if we didn’t
notice every time the government does that to us, but our biggest problem is
our society’s short-term memory.
For more movie critiques please visit: IMDb and Rotten Tomatoes.
For more movie critiques please visit: IMDb and Rotten Tomatoes.
Tuesday, August 27, 2013
By the breeze...
One of my favorite artist, Ellie Goulding.
My name is Antonio Raimundí and I live in Dorado. I am only child and have three dogs which two of them are named after two american singers that are Madonna and Beyoncé. My parents have been married for more than 25 years and they met very young. At Dorado Academy I studied since pre-kinder to 12th grade, in other words I had all my childhood at the same place, but I can’t regret it because there were many exciting experiences. My goals are to become an orthopedic surgeon and I think that this idea came after been treated twice after some incidents I had some years ago. The first incident was when I jump off a moving golf car driven by me and the second one was after I broke the ACL (a ligament near the knee) at a soccer game on school.
About
my trips, maybe I can’t say much because the only places I have visited are
Florida and some Caribbean islands that I went on a cruise. I have gone to
Florida approximately 6 times or even more because I have some family members
we like to visit, especially to keep in contact with them and see all the new
cousins I have. Also, every time we go, we try to visit some attraction parks
such as Busch Gardens, which is my favorite and Universal Studios. But I can
say that my best and unforgettable journeys I have had, had been here at Puerto
Rico visiting different cities with my family along. My family has a beach
apartment at Luquillo and a boat at Fajardo and I could say that I have had the
best moments of my live there along with my girlfriend.
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